A princess must find her place in a reborn world.
She flees on her wedding day.
She steals ancient documents from the Chancellor’s secret collection.
She is pursued by bounty hunters sent by her own father.
She is Princess Lia, seventeen, First Daughter of the House of Morrighan.
The Kingdom of Morrighan is steeped in tradition and the stories of a bygone world, but some traditions Lia can’t abide. Like having to marry someone she’s never met to secure a political alliance.
Fed up and ready for a new life, Lia flees to a distant village on the morning of her wedding. She settles in among the common folk, intrigued when two mysterious and handsome strangers arrive—and unaware that one is the jilted prince and the other an assassin sent to kill her. Deceptions swirl and Lia finds herself on the brink of unlocking perilous secrets—secrets that may unravel her world—even as she feels herself falling in love.
I’m generally bad at being mean about things, especially books. I like to imagine the author writing them and then get sad if I don’t like the writing because my imaginary (and I’m sure the real) author worked so hard to get it out to people!
But that only explains my three star rating for a fairly meh book overall.
It had so much promise: the first daughters with ‘the gift’, the running away from an arranged marriage, the assassin and prince both arriving on her doorstep and her not knowing who is who! That all sounds pretty exciting, and a lot of the things I like reading about when I want a comfort read.
But it wasn’t executed particularly well for me. There were lots of times when things were told and not shown, especially when new chapters started. A lot of ‘I turned up there because this happened and then this did, and so here I am.’ Like, I want to see all of that, to feel the reactions of the characters and to know more about how they handle every situation. To bond, basically.
In saying that, this book somehow also managed to overstay its welcome in certain scenes. It’s not like I want daring sword fights to the death in every chapter, but almost half a book being just ‘I settled into this town and then two guys show up’ was a bit much. I think I was 300 pages in when something really happened to drive the plot forward.
I did however love the main character, Lia was so nice and exactly how I thought a rebelling princess would be. Unfortunately I wanted to see even more of this too. Just a bit more in the palace showing her rebelling in little ways leading up to her wedding day would have really rounded her out I think, and shown the contrast between how she was expected to be and who she wanted to be in the town she escaped to much more.
Only once the plot starts moving forward in the last third did I really get what I wanted to see in her. More fire and emotions and her really coming into her own.
Oh, also, there was one scene that I almost laughed at. *Minor spoilers* here for those trying to avoid them.
There’s a scene where the Prince and his crew are talking about Lia and finding out more about her through the Prince and his description. This, to me, sounded much more like a stereotypical ‘girl chat’ than any conversation I’ve heard before. He goes all mushy all of a sudden, out of character, and then literally goes ‘and the kiss…’ *deep sigh* And his friends go ‘It was that good??’
I don’t know about you, but I’ve never had that level of stereotypical girl talk with all of my best friends, even when we’re being especially gossipy! It threw me out of the story a little and seemed jarring in terms of the Prince’s character.
Overall, I still think this book is a good easy read, if you don’t mind ignoring a lot of plot issues and being flexible with your character development, and I might even read the second book in the series in future if I run out of books I can just read for fun and turn my brain off during. (You need those every now and again, to escape daily stresses.) But, I wouldn’t necessarily recommend it to all of my friends.
P.S. Though look at that gorgeous cover! If anything, it’ll look good on your shelves.