In the tropical kingdom of Rhodaire, magical, elemental Crows are part of every aspect of life…until the Illucian empire invades, destroying everything.
That terrible night has thrown Princess Anthia into a deep depression. Her sister Caliza is busy running the kingdom after their mother’s death, but all Thia can do is think of all she has lost.
But when Caliza is forced to agree to a marriage between Thia and the crown prince of Illucia, Thia is finally spurred into action. And after stumbling upon a hidden Crow egg in the rubble of a rookery, she and her sister devise a dangerous plan to hatch the egg in secret and get back what was taken from them.
Title: The Storm Crow
Author: Kalyn Josephson
Genre: Fantasy YA
[DISCLAIMER] I received an Advance Reader Copy of this book in a Fairyloot subscription box so please note that changes may have been made in the finished copy.
I was so happy to get this book in my December 2018 Fairyloot box. An advanced copy of anything is exciting, but a book about elemental crows big enough to ride and warring kingdoms just makes it so much better!
And this book was a pretty enjoyable read, I thought about it when I wasn’t reading it, and it was fun. But it wasn’t quite amazing.
Let’s start with the bad things first so I can finish on a high:
The writing style felt a little cliche, like a lot of YA books I used to read. I could guess the type of personality a character would have before even knowing their name, and the plot twists were more things I was waiting around for until they happened.
It starts to chill out a bit towards the middle of the book, and the main guy main character has started to act less like a walking cliche which I appreciate. Though I think maybe a little more show rather than tell about how the other countries were also oppressed would have been good.
Metaphors and similes were like water in a thunderstorm… everywhere:
This title kind of says it all. Imagine that same sentence but copied over and over. Everything was like something else! I think this may have been less obvious if more of the similes had been metaphors? Like for example, ‘The torrential downpour of my thoughts’ as opposed to ‘my thoughts were like a torrential downpour, flooding my mind’ might break up the rhythm a bit.
The similes can work well, but used a bit more sparingly I could have the chance to see how the character changes from worrying inside her head to when she’s more straight-to-the-point, the contrast would be good.
Also, “the lanterns reflected off the fog like moonlight on water” took me a while to really imagine… I think those two things didn’t mix well in my head.
Unique voices for characters:
Sometimes it was a little hard to tell which character was saying what. Not because the writing made it confusing, more because the voices weren’t that unique. This was especially the case with Thia and her best friend; they were so similar that it made me stumble on some scenes while reading their dialogue.
Suspenseful scenes a little rushed:
This title doesn’t really need much description: the fight scenes or chase scenes all kind of ended quickly and with little fanfare. A little description or internal monologue thrown in the scene, or just a bit more of the scene itself, would have helped to drag the suspense out and make the climax a little more dramatic.
But there were some really good things about the book also!
Representation of depression:
I really appreciated depression being represented pretty well, how it can come in waves and just knock you out when you thought you were doing fine. Lots of people think you can be ‘fixed’ when you have depression, but it’s more years of learning how to counterbalance the negative voices in your head and remembering that the bad parts won’t be bad forever. Mental health is usually a lifelong battle.
The world of The Storm Crow was really imaginative and new. Giant crows you can ride and that have elemental powers just sounds so unique, I’ve never heard of anything like it before! I’m really looking forward to how this world gets developed in later books, and to some more details about the other lands mentioned in this book.
Overall, I really enjoyed reading this book. There were some niggles that I think can easily be ironed out in sequels and I’ll be keeping an eye on this author for future books down the line. Also, you always have to remember that a fair amount can change between an ARC and a finished copy, so I’d check that out before making any solid calls on this book.
I liked it, and that’s all you really have to get out of a book in the end.